pretense

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By sligobay

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without your fair approval.......

Pretense

Let not your fiery eyes despise,

All worth departs without your fair approval;

Let not your fearsome cries chastise,

All hope dissolves in fear of love’s removal.

Forgive me, for I haven’t the sense,

Forget me, pray take no offense;

Rebuke me, be not so incensed,

Embrace me, let your ire be pretense.


© Copyright 2009-2011 Gerry Gilligan - SligoBay with all rights reserved.

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...we used to laugh.

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Benjimester profile image

Benjimester Level 5 Commenter 3 years ago

Man, living life in fear of losing love is the worst. Nice short and sweet poem.

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maven101 Level 5 Commenter 3 years ago

Taut, clean, and well delivered...I really enjoyed this poem...Thanks

AdamGD 2 years ago

Very much moved by this piece thank you

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sligobay Hub Author 22 months ago

Thanks for your comments. I am rereading my own poetry seeking the inspiration to continue, Oh Muse of Poetry, where art thou now.

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Pearldiver 17 months ago

© Copyright 2011 Gerry Gilligan - SligoBay with all rights reserved.

To use (Copy & Paste) for New Year's Poetry... Be Well

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sligobay Hub Author 17 months ago

Thank you Pearldiver. I appreciate the copyright help and your visit. All the best for Christmas and the New Year.

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