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By sligobay

ferris wheel

Sky view

prose

rollercoaster

The approach to fifty is like reaching the top of the highest point on the roller coaster as your cart slows and struggles twice as hard to conquer the summit. Once you arrive at the top, there is just a single moment to observe the beauty of the acme before you are confronted by the view of the precipitous descent of the track below. Keep your eyes on the track and both hands on the bar, and may you shriek a child's cry of joy, release and exilleration as you coast through the balance of your amusement ride.

Cathederal view

'alta vista' or high view of Sligo from ferris wheel acme

Give time, time

Live2Give

Racing through life with no time in the day,

Pacing in strife, no time for delay;

Embracing the day, making time for need,

Giving one's self, absolves the sin of greed.

gerry gilligan, 2010 copyright. all rights reserved.

a/k/a sligobay

Play while you can

When I get older.....

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sukkran profile image

sukkran 2 years ago

view from the rc is something amazing. very interesting hub.

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Cris A Level 2 Commenter 2 years ago

i like the ferris wheel metaphor for reaching fifty. i have a long way to go and i think i wouldn't mind reaching the topmost part and taking in the view. Nice hub! Thanks for sharing :D

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maven101 Level 6 Commenter 2 years ago

Nice Hub, thanks for the mental break...

I'm about 3/4 into my present ferris wheel ride...looking forward to the next turn on the wheel...

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gjcody 2 years ago

I really like the poem. It really tells it so well. We do race through each day. Why do we not take the time to smell the roses. And with these computers ...we need I say anymore. Each and everyone of us is strapped to our chairs nightly or daily and sometimes both ...trying to get ahead or keep up.

Thank you for sharing your point of view about fifty. Actually ..I feel like I am now on a roller coaster ride and I can't get off. Things are going too fast to actually enjoy watching. And sometimes it is rather scary.

Look forward to reading more. Keep up the great hubs. My best to you!

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BetsyIckes 2 years ago

Hey I hit 50 in July! YIKES! Great hub!

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sligobay Hub Author 17 months ago

Thanks everyone for calling over and your kind words.

I didn't think that we could comment on comments or respond to faithful followers back when you left your remarks. Cheers.

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kimberlyslyrics Level 7 Commenter 7 months ago

I have been words without a tune, I was a song still unsung, A poem with no rhyme, A dancer out of time, But then came change, Loving ....

I have my days;

if I could be anything in the world......Invisible

If I could do anything that i liked, then I would........disappear

time is our greatest gift and thank you for reminding me to celebrate it

love kim

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sligobay Hub Author 7 months ago

Thanks Kim for your visit and comment. Time is on our side- yes it is.

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