Fleeting
64Sligo Bay
what was I thinking?
Fleeting Thought
Where might a fleeting thought once gone be found ?
Perhaps, truth meeting fallacy may find,
Treasure trove of reason where thoughts abound,
A trace of bankruptcy confounds sound mind;
Somewhere above, ephemeral wisps known ,
Nowhere in view can clouded thoughts eschew;
From where, forsooth, can sword be drawn from stone?
Sharp minds command befuddlement subdue.
What was that thought which I can’t remember?
Recall it, I will, too late to value;
Too lame a mind to raise fire from ember,
Was it a thought worth dear time to pursue?
Cling not to the old thought, thought yesterday;
Bear in mind this moment’s moment, this day.
Gerry Gilligan, a/k/a Sligobay
Copyright 2010, all rights reserved
How To Write a Sonnet
A sonnet is a poetic form used by great poets such as Shakespeare, W.B.Yeats and Robert Frost, to name a few, over the past five hundred years. Blank verse and "free range" rhymnes are a "walk in the park" by comparison.
Poetry is a discipline, if one chooses to pursue the craft. Other Hubs address the numerous formats to which poets conform from Japanese Haiku to Korean Siku. There are links to a few Hubs below. This Hub is confined to the format of sonnets which are of two types; the English sonnet and the Italian sonnet.
The English Sonnet
The theme of the sonnet is divided into two sections. The initial section presents the situation or thought while the conclusion or climax is presented by the second section. The first section consists of three quatrains, a four line stanza. That means three stanzas, each containing four lines or a total of twelve lines. Write the three quatrains using a-b-a-b, c-d-c-d, e-f-e-f rhyme scheme.
The next section should consist of a couplet, i.e., two rhyming lines of poetry. The couplet should use a g-g rhyme scheme, where the last words of the two lines rhyme with each other.
Most sonnets use the iambic pentameter. An iamb is a metrical 'foot' composed of two syllables, with the accent on the second syllable. A few examples are 'to-day','dis-may' and 'en-rage.'
Pentameter means there are five metrical feet per line. Therefore, Iambic pentameter means each line consists of five iambic feet (10 total syllables).
The Italian Sonnet
An Italian sonnet uses a-b-b-a-a-b-b-a rhymne scheme for the first section consisting of eight lines, called the octave. ( As an aside, this is similar to a musical octave which consists of a scale of eight notes.) The second section, called the sestet , uses a rhymne sheme of c-d-e-c-d-e. An acceptable variation allows the sestet to use a rhymne scheme of c-d-c-d-c-d . Most Italian sonnets use iambic pentameter as with their English cousin.
Wind
An English Sonnet
THE SILKEN TENT
by Robert Frost
She is as in a field a silken tent
At midday when the sunny summer breeze
Has dried the dew and all its ropes relent,
So that in guys it gently sways at ease,
And its supporting central cedar pole,
That is its pinnacle to heavenward
And signifies the sureness of the soul,
Seems to owe naught to any single cord,
But strictly held by none, is loosely bound
By countless silken ties of love and thought
To every thing on earth the compass round,
And only by one's going slightly taut
In the capriciousness of summer air
Is of the slightest bondage made aware.
Harmony
William Shakespeare
SONNET I
I
1. From fairest creatures we desire increase,
2. That thereby beauty's rose might never die,
3. But as the riper should by time decease,
4. His tender heir might bear his memory:
5. But thou contracted to thine own bright eyes,
6. Feed'st thy light's flame with self-substantial fuel,
7. Making a famine where abundance lies,
8. Thy self thy foe, to thy sweet self too cruel:
9. Thou that art now the world's fresh ornament,
10. And only herald to the gaudy spring,
11. Within thine own bud buriest thy content,
12. And, tender churl, mak'st waste in niggarding:
13. Pity the world, or else this glutton be,
14. To eat the world's due, by the grave and thee.
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Morning Gerry...Wonderful prose on a valued theme...Carpe Diem...
I read with empathy the lines " What was that thought which I can’t remember? Recall it, I will, too late to value;"...
That is not a failure of memory, simply priority...
Thank you for this wise poem reminding us to " stay in the moment "...Larry
Wonderful Hub, Gerry. I love the sonnetform though doubt I would ever be so brave as to attempt it myself - not enough discipline! LOL!
Love and peace
Tony
....as a poet of magnificence you are as pure as they come my friend!!!! Thanks so much again for your life affirming comments and advice - it is always greatly appreciated - indeed!
love this hub - your writing, is of course, untouchable!
And that lovely man from Hawaii (sadly he died) has such a sweet voice - this is a gift to your readers who may be unaware of him - and as always your writing is a gift - and I haven't kissed the blarney stone - lol - yet!
I'm inspired to write a zombie sonnet.
I found the sonnet read interesting on how to, very informative hub.. Fleeting Thoughts carried much meaning.
Wow.... I just loved this hub! You have a beautiful way with words. I love that you recognize Iz Kamakawiwo'ole a native here to our Island. Everyone here loves Iz... the man with the beautiful voice. Thanks for sharing with us!
















singlmomat52 20 months ago
Your way with words is very nice. It suprises me when I find poems written by men with such depth!
Thanks for sharing!