Fleeting

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By sligobay

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what was I thinking?

 

Fleeting Thought

 

Where might a fleeting thought once gone be found ?

 Perhaps, truth meeting fallacy may find,

 Treasure trove of reason where thoughts abound,                                    

 A trace of bankruptcy confounds sound mind;   

 Somewhere above, ephemeral wisps known ,  

 Nowhere in view can clouded thoughts eschew;          

 From where, forsooth, can sword be drawn from stone?    

 Sharp minds command befuddlement  subdue.

What was that thought which I can’t remember?                 

 Recall it, I will, too late to value;

 Too lame a mind to raise fire from ember,                                  

Was it a thought worth dear time to pursue?                         

Cling not to the old thought, thought yesterday;          

Bear in mind this moment’s moment, this day.    

 

Gerry Gilligan, a/k/a Sligobay

Copyright 2010, all rights reserved

How To Write a Sonnet

A sonnet is a poetic form used by great poets such as  Shakespeare, W.B.Yeats and Robert Frost, to name a few, over the past five hundred years. Blank verse and "free range" rhymnes are a "walk in the park" by comparison.

Poetry is a discipline, if one chooses to pursue the craft. Other Hubs address the numerous formats to which poets conform from Japanese Haiku to Korean Siku. There are links to a few Hubs below.  This Hub is confined to the format of sonnets which are of two types; the English sonnet and the Italian sonnet.

The English Sonnet

The theme of the sonnet is divided into two sections. The initial section presents the situation or thought while the conclusion or climax is presented by the second section. The first section consists of three quatrains, a four line stanza. That means three stanzas, each containing four lines or a total of twelve lines. Write the three quatrains using a-b-a-b, c-d-c-d, e-f-e-f rhyme scheme.

The next section should consist of a couplet, i.e., two rhyming lines of poetry. The couplet should use a g-g rhyme scheme, where the last words of the two lines rhyme with each other.

Most sonnets use the iambic pentameter.  An iamb is a metrical 'foot' composed of two syllables, with the accent on the second syllable. A few examples are 'to-day','dis-may' and  'en-rage.'

Pentameter means there are five metrical feet per line. Therefore, Iambic pentameter means each line consists of five iambic feet (10 total syllables).

The Italian Sonnet

 An Italian sonnet uses a-b-b-a-a-b-b-a rhymne scheme for the first section consisting of eight lines, called the octave. ( As an aside, this is similar to a musical octave which consists of a scale of eight notes.)  The second section, called the sestet , uses a rhymne sheme of  c-d-e-c-d-e. An acceptable variation allows the sestet to use a rhymne scheme of c-d-c-d-c-d .  Most Italian sonnets use iambic pentameter as with their English cousin.

 

 

Wind

An English Sonnet

THE SILKEN TENT

by Robert Frost

She is as in a field a silken tent
At midday when the sunny summer breeze
Has dried the dew and all its ropes relent,
So that in guys it gently sways at ease,
And its supporting central cedar pole,
That is its pinnacle to heavenward
And signifies the sureness of the soul,
Seems to owe naught to any single cord,
But strictly held by none, is loosely bound
By countless silken ties of love and thought
To every thing on earth the compass round,
And only by one's going slightly taut
In the capriciousness of summer air
Is of the slightest bondage made aware.

Harmony

William Shakespeare

 

SONNET I

 I

1. From fairest creatures we desire increase,
2. That thereby beauty's rose might never die,
3. But as the riper should by time decease,
4. His tender heir might bear his memory:
5. But thou contracted to thine own bright eyes,
6. Feed'st thy light's flame with self-substantial fuel,
7. Making a famine where abundance lies,
8. Thy self thy foe, to thy sweet self too cruel:
9. Thou that art now the world's fresh ornament,
10. And only herald to the gaudy spring,
11. Within thine own bud buriest thy content,
12. And, tender churl, mak'st waste in niggarding:
13. Pity the world, or else this glutton be,
14. To eat the world's due, by the grave and thee.

Wonderful

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ALOHA

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singlmomat52 20 months ago

Your way with words is very nice. It suprises me when I find poems written by men with such depth!

Thanks for sharing!

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maven101 Level 5 Commenter 20 months ago

Morning Gerry...Wonderful prose on a valued theme...Carpe Diem...

I read with empathy the lines " What was that thought which I can’t remember? Recall it, I will, too late to value;"...

That is not a failure of memory, simply priority...

Thank you for this wise poem reminding us to " stay in the moment "...Larry

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sligobay Hub Author 20 months ago

Thanks Larry and 52-

Sieze the Day is a great summary of my sonnet's last couplet. I found this to be a challenge to construct with all the limitation of form.

52- I am humbled and flattered by "such depth" as a descriptive of me or my poetry when I feel that I barely scratch the surface of things. Cheers,g.

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tonymac04 20 months ago

Wonderful Hub, Gerry. I love the sonnetform though doubt I would ever be so brave as to attempt it myself - not enough discipline! LOL!

Love and peace

Tony

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sligobay Hub Author 20 months ago

Great to see you visit, Tony. The cadence of a sonnet doesn't feel natural or flow freely yet. Practice makes perfect. Thank you for your kind words once again. Cheers.

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epigramman 20 months ago

....as a poet of magnificence you are as pure as they come my friend!!!! Thanks so much again for your life affirming comments and advice - it is always greatly appreciated - indeed!

love this hub - your writing, is of course, untouchable!

And that lovely man from Hawaii (sadly he died) has such a sweet voice - this is a gift to your readers who may be unaware of him - and as always your writing is a gift - and I haven't kissed the blarney stone - lol - yet!

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sligobay Hub Author 20 months ago

Hi Epi- thanks for calling over to visit. IZ Kamakawiwo'ole is and was the face and voice of native Hawain people. Cheers.

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nicomp Level 6 Commenter 20 months ago

I'm inspired to write a zombie sonnet.

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sligobay Hub Author 20 months ago

Go for it. You are the Zombie Prince in my book.

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artfux 20 months ago

I found the sonnet read interesting on how to, very informative hub.. Fleeting Thoughts carried much meaning.

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ROMANCER OF LIFE Level 1 Commenter 20 months ago

Wow.... I just loved this hub! You have a beautiful way with words. I love that you recognize Iz Kamakawiwo'ole a native here to our Island. Everyone here loves Iz... the man with the beautiful voice. Thanks for sharing with us!

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sligobay Hub Author 20 months ago

Greetings Artflux and Romancer- Thank you for your visit and kind words. I do need to caption my hubs better to let Hubbers know the little nuggets of gold which I hide in my Hubs. I think that I need to do two new Hubs- first, How to write a Sonnet and two, Iz K., Hawaii.

Cheers.

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